Coryburn Girls Secrets

All girls have their secrets, here’s some just for you.

 

What was the most enjoyable part of Coryburn Girls Skimming the Surface to write?

 

Well, Skimming the Surface, was of course a new adventure. But out of writing it, I found I loved the beginning the most. When telling the story, trying to find the words to those pictures, it can sometimes feel almost overwhelmingly impossible. The beginning feels like it is almost impossible and of course this gives me the most daunting challenge. I think that personally I will always love a beginning because it carries my energy and anticipation to tell the story I can never get out of my mind.

This gives me a chance to try new techniques and goals.

The Coryburn Girls Skimming the Surface is the first in a series of three shorts. It carries the beginning of the story, to really start to unravel secrets, lies and discoveries. I loved writing almost every scene with bad behaviour and sassy dialogue. It has enabled me to tap into wit and honesty in a new way that I loved experimenting with.

Writing Exercise- His Life Changed on a Tuesday

“His Life Changed On A Tuesday”

 

His life changed on a Tuesday,

He just doesn’t know it yet

His life changed on a Tuesday,

But I know its not when we met,

When we met, the sky was grey

When we met, I looked in his eyes

I saw all the hope and dreams

I saw him and he saw me

Every conversation

Every talk, every laugh

And every smile

Lead to this,

His life changed on a Tuesday

He became him

His face became him

And he became beautiful,

But that wasn’t on a Tuesday.

 

Now here is the secret,

He still doesn’t know

His life changed on a Tuesday

It was a Tuesday a little while ago,

When I decided, I couldn’t let him go,

Over time I have tried

And every time I have failed

It was a Tuesday I decided, I could not let him go.

 

Now when I look him in the eyes,

And see that sweet smile,

I wonder not if we will make it

Not if we will last

Because of that Tuesday in the past.

 

When I look him in the eyes

I fall more and more each time,

Because that smile, that laugh

That silliness is mine,

I love him and I cant deny

That every single time

I hear that sweet voice be gentle

I smile and feel comfortable

In myself and him

 

His life changed on a Tuesday

He doesn’t know it now

He will not know it tomorrow

But little by little every day,

I want to see him happy,

 

That’s something we share,

But here is a secret, I know too well,

Only you can make yourself happy

So don’t depend on others

To give you, your self worth

But thank them kindly for every smile,

Because sometimes

Just sometimes, they may already be there,

Waiting for you to let them change your life again.