So here’s some bonus information for Breathing Smog.
This was the first time I had taken the time to write, really write, sit down and type up something, it was the first time I had finished something. Complete follow through.
During this time I experienced and discovered a lot about myself I struggled honestly to write with clarity and understanding. It was a struggle to maintain an impartial narrative, at which point I must make it clear that the idea of being impartial failed. I used this as my first experience to experiment with the voice of an author.
It was a sincere struggle throughout to deliver the sensitivity of the subject with tact.
The characters however were hard to accomplish with integrity or lack of. The hidden unseen possibilities and motivations were a struggle to understand the complexity but it was the first true piece that I could be proud of.
